thesis statement

 The BYD Yangwang U9 is an all-electric supercar developed by BYD's luxury sub-brand, Yangwang, representing a blend of advanced engineering, innovative features, and luxury. Built on BYD's proprietary e⁴ platform, the U9 is equipped with a quad-motor all-wheel-drive system delivering 1,288 horsepower. This power enables the vehicle to accelerate from 0 to 100 km/h in a mere 2 seconds, making it one of the fastest production supercars (Vijayanthiren, 2024).

According to Wee (2025), The U9’s standout feature is its "DiSus-X" intelligent suspension system, designed for exceptional adaptability. This system enables the vehicle to perform groundbreaking maneuvers, such as "jumping" over obstacles like potholes, while maintaining optimal handling and stability on various terrains. Real-time adjustments made by sensors and actuators enhance ride comfort and performance, setting a new standard in vehicle suspension technology.

Aesthetically, the U9 features a sleek coupe design with butterfly doors, embodying futuristic elegance. Its interior integrates BYD’s DiLink intelligent cockpit system and premium audio solutions, ensuring a luxurious driving experience (BYD, 2024).

Thesis Statement:
The YangWang U9, equipped with BYD's groundbreaking DiSus-X Intelligent Body Control System, revolutionizes automotive engineering by combining advanced suspension technology, real-time adaptability, with unique features like vertical jump capability to enhance performance, solidifying its position as a trailblazer in electric supercar innovation.

References (APA 7th Edition)

BYD (2024, February 25). Yangwang launched the U9 priced at 1.68 million RMB. https://www.byd.com/us/news-list/YANGWANG-Launched-the-U9-Priced-at-1-68-Million-RMB

Vijayanthiren, V.  (2024, November 15). BYD Yangwang U9 electric supercar sets record at Nürburgring. Motor Authority. https://www.motorauthority.com/news/1143696_byd-yangwang-u9-electric-supercar-ring-time-7-17

Wee, M.  (2025, January 17). Recap: Yangwang U9 showcased at Singapore Motor Show. SGCarMart. https://www.sgcarmart.com/articles/news/recap-yangwang-u9-showcased-at-singapore-motor-show-36474

 Why I chose the BYD Yangwang U9

I chose the BYD Yangwang U9 for its unique suspension system, the DiSus-X Intelligent Body Control System, which separates it from its competitors. This advanced suspension system utilized multiple control technologies to allow for a smooth and stable ride, even on uneven terrain and obstacles, and maintaining high speeds. The system's ability to perform jumps helps it to dodge potholes, enhancing the safety and comfort of the driver by minimizing body roll, reducing vibrations and maintaining stability during high-speed maneuvers, making the U9 one of the top choices in the EV market. We can correlate these features back into Civil Engineering, regarding the aspects of vibration control and structural dynamics.

Research Pathway

The BYD Yangwang U9's advanced DiSus-X Intelligent Body Control System parallels civil engineering principles of vibration control and structural dynamics. The system's real-time suspension adjustments minimize vibrations and enhance ride comfort, similar to how civil engineers use dampers and isolators to reduce vibrations in buildings and bridges. Its ability to manage dynamic forces and maintain stability mirrors the design strategies used in civil engineering to ensure structures withstand dynamic loads. Both fields aim to enhance safety and comfort, whether on the road or in our built environment, by leveraging advanced technologies for stability and efficiency.

CoPilot prompt

"Can you give a brief overview of the BYD Yangwang U9?"

"What are the key features of the BYD Yangwang U9?"

"Can you explain the DiSus-X Intelligent Body Control System in the BYD Yangwang U9?"

"How does the DiSus-X system enhance the ride comfort and stability of the U9?"

"How does the DiSus-X system in the BYD Yangwang U9 relate to civil engineering principles?"

"Can you compare the vibration control in the U9 to techniques used in civil engineering?"

"Can you summarize the relationship between the DiSus-X system and civil engineering in one paragraph?"

 Reality: I have trouble focusing while studying.

Cause: Frequent distractions & easy access to my phone

Effects/Results: Difficulty retaining information when studying and more time wasted.

Goal: Improve focus during study sessions.

Possible change: Remove distractions while studying.

Solution: Study in a distraction-free environment for one week and track focus levels.

Outcome of change: Evaluate whether focus and productivity improve.

Self Introduction

 Dear Professor Brad Blackstone,

My name is Wong Jia Rong and I'm currently a year 1 civil engineering student in Singapore Institute of Technology. Using this letter, I hope to introduce myself further for you to get to know me better. I was a student in Singapore Polytechnic from civil engineering for 3 years. The reason for me to join this industry is as from young I looked up to both my brothers who were working in STEM, and this inspired me to be an engineer. With an interest in civil engineering since young and being a more hands on learner, I ultimately chose civil engineering.

One of my key strengths in communication is delivering clear and concise messages, ensuring my points are understood effortlessly. However, due to neglecting  the feelings of others, this strength of mine has shown that I offend people without knowing I have done so. One weakness of mine is when presenting to a large crowd, I tend to get nervous and stutter in front of the audience. In most cases, I tend to forget my script and end up stumbling through my presentation.

One of my goals from this module is to learn how to speak confidently and intelligently to avoid accidentally offending people. This skill will allow me to avoid any conflict in the workforce be it being a leader or not. Another skill I would like to pick up from this module is how to write emails in a more professional and friendly manner. With this skillset I believe that I would have a better time in the workforce communicating with my colleagues or bosses. With these said, I seek for your guidance in helping me accomplish the goals that I have set for myself.

Regards

Wong Jia Rong

Task 3

 “Communication skills are an essential component in the education of engineering

students to facilitate not just students’ education but also to prepare them for their

future careers.” 

Marc Riemer, Faculty of Engineering, Monash University (2007)

In this quote , we can comprehend from Marc Riemer quote that communications skills are not just for educational purposes but is also very useful in the workforce that is important in one's lifetime